For my revision I spent a majority of my time on the selection of the video clips and the edits I did to make the clips really impact the poem. A major flaw of my poem draft was the timing of the clips and the words. To fix this but keep the original tempo that I intended was to make the clips…
For my video, I decided to use dancing videos to portray a somewhat deep and personal poem by Selena Odom. I revised my e-poem by using multiple dancers from multiple videos, as well as modifying the text to be similar in every clip. I hope it has a bigger impact, for it is inspired by a family…