Posted on Wed, 02/06/2019 - 15:21
by bryannacameron
To revise my poem, I decided to get rid of the change in tone halfway and stick to the original, calming theme. I also made edits to the text display and added another few lines so that it would end in an appropriate spot. I think this video captures the true meaning of the poem more accurately.
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I think the revisions have…
I think the revisions have made this much stronger. Some of the larger bits of text--e.g., between 22-30 secs might be placed up a bit so the bottom does not fall below the image. I enjoyed this very much.