There were many references to scholarly articles but not many quotes. The scholarship included in the essay is clear, makes sense, and is explained well. One suggestion is to add quotes.
I think overall you gave a really good overview of the poem and I really understand the background you gave and how the whole story fits together. Although, I think you could benefit from adding more specifics related to figurative language and rhyme/sound, etc.
Your paper is really good the only concern I would have is attempting to organize the paragraphs and information better. From what I could tell there was only really information on the last stanzas. You could do this by addressing details from every stanza.
MLA format does not require a title page. Instead, you use
Neal E. Bibdarsh
Professor Haujeemoto
English 201
2 Nov 2017
(as shown on the MLA format website)
Your in-text citations look good. I would just look over again and make sure you added a citation to everything that needed one because I saw a few quotes that did not include citations.
In the third paragraph, I would suggest possibly adding a quote to show how the poem is in relation to the speaker's indecision
I would add an introductory sentence to the paragraph about JFK because it seems to jump from the analysis of the poem to his comments about Frost's death
When you're analyzing the poem, I would suggest indicating specific themes, symbols, and images since you mentioned those three in your second paragraph. For example, "the image of the horse 'giving his harness bells a shake', shows that..."
First thing i noticed was that it is not in MLA format, I made the same mistake too
your references were great and helped explain that poem very well, you did a great job with showing your own perspective of the poem. The last thing that I noticed was that you could use some more quotes
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Emily Elkas Revision Comment
There were many references to scholarly articles but not many quotes. The scholarship included in the essay is clear, makes sense, and is explained well. One suggestion is to add quotes.
I think overall you gave a really good overview of the poem and I really understand the background you gave and how the whole story fits together. Although, I think you could benefit from adding more specifics related to figurative language and rhyme/sound, etc.
Your paper is really good the only concern I would have is attempting to organize the paragraphs and information better. From what I could tell there was only really information on the last stanzas. You could do this by addressing details from every stanza.
MLA format does not require a title page. Instead, you use
Neal E. Bibdarsh
Professor Haujeemoto
English 201
2 Nov 2017
(as shown on the MLA format website)
Your in-text citations look good. I would just look over again and make sure you added a citation to everything that needed one because I saw a few quotes that did not include citations.
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First thing i noticed was that it is not in MLA format, I made the same mistake too
your references were great and helped explain that poem very well, you did a great job with showing your own perspective of the poem. The last thing that I noticed was that you could use some more quotes