1. I think the report does a good job in being clear with what is being studied. 
2. Yes but maybe dive into why Twitter is a heavily used platform for this topic
3. They are fitting with the rest of the report and I liked how you labeled them as “Figure A”, etc. which made it easy to track when they were referenced. 
4. The format is easy to follow as a reader. Just some small suggestions: 
   1. I think the majority of the “Research” section can just be incorporated into the introduction, rather than have it after the data
   2. In the intro, I would have “Situations like this give twitter users the perfect opportunity to @Trump and @GOP their perspective, which is what I will be analyzing” as my closing sentence to have it less choppy.
5. Graph Data Analysis can be separated into a few different paragraphs that will allow you to separate each analysis 

I think you did a good job on your paper. 

• For the intro you could just label it introduction
• Your report has a lot of evidence backing up your subject
• The connections could be strengthened by using another source
• I think your graphs were good
• What final comments and big picture suggestions do you have to strengthen the paper?
• Just delete the empty pages and your good

1. Overall I thought this essay was very focused and you covered the topic of Trump Camps very thoroughly. The twitter community was analyzed and included in very well but in the introduction I would quickly state what twitter is and how it is used.

2. I have no suggestions for the focus of this topic of social interest as I though it was very well explained and organized. 

3. When looking at the information included in the graphs I thought that it was very smart including the political affiliation as it displays who discusses it the most. I also think another helpful category that would be interesting to study would be to organize the tweets into the category of their stance such as if they support or are against the Trump Camps. 

4. Don't forget in the bibliography to take off the extra paragraph of writing after each link. Second, I think you should incorporate the graphs into the writing, so once you mention the information in the graph you could put the graph in just to keep it a little more organized.

5. Big picture I think you did really great!!

• State what twitter is and how it is used more in the introduction
• Make the closing statements of each of my paragraphs less "choppy"

• I plan to adjust my introduction to include more background on Twitter and introduce how the platform is used. 
• The opening statement of my paper is too general and I should narrow down the focus a little it almost just sounds like fluff.

• After looking it over and talking with Professor Anderson I decided it would be helpful to include another explorer graph and discuss why there is so much surrounding @FLOTUS.
• I might decide to exclude a graph that I feel is not helpful to the essay and replace it with the explorer graph I was talking about before.

• Separate graph data analysis into different paragraphs
• Delete extra blank pages at the end
• Label the intro as "introduction"
• Delete annotations from the works cited