The Road not taken Paper draft

Posted on: Fri, 07/19/2019 - 22:10 By: jdestro

Comments

  • Your sources are scholarly and the quotes you used worked well for your essay.  You also did a good job of using a good amount of quotes, as well as integrating them in smoothly.
  • You did a good job of introducing the poem and explaining it, maybe just try to add a quote or two from the poem.
  • Overall there aren't any major concerns with the poem, but I would try to add on to the conclusion just a little bit more.
  • Make sure to put your bibliography in alphabetical order, change the font to Times New Roman, add the professor's name into the header, as well as the page numbers with your last name.

  • The sources that you incorporated into your essay are very scholarly and help develop the essay. The quotes that you used are also very well incorporated into the essay. 
  • I would consider adding some more detail from the actual poem so it helps the reader know what is going on. Other than that the explanation of the poem was very good.
  • The poem did not have any major issues but the only thing I would say is to focus on making sure that Robert Frost is always capitalized. 
  • To follow the MLA format you need to make sure that the font is in times new roman. Other than that I do not see any more issues. 

  • Lots of great quotations from the scholarly articles that support your points. Cited correctly in MLA as well.
  • Maybe examine the stanzas from the actual poem and add some of your own explanations
  • Really good implementation of information and sources. Maybe just add a bit more to your own interpretation and add on to a conclusion
  • Formatting looks fine, just add your bibliography for the citations.