Twitter Analysis Rough Draft

Posted on: Mon, 07/01/2019 - 00:25 By: gabykatz
twitter project intro.docx

Comments

  1. It is clear what the topic of the conversation is.
  2. The connection between the topic and twitter is strong. 
  3. Figures:
    1. You could go into more depth with Figure three by adding one of those maps that show who was being mentioned the most in tweets
  4. Format:
    1. I liked how when addressing the different figures, you split them into separate paragraphs. 
    2. Bibliography : I don’t think the source analysis needs to be included 
  5. Suggestions: 
    1. In the intro you could be more specific to Twitter and Trumps presence using the platform 

  • The overall format of your paper is really good and it includes all the aspects that we were supposed to have. Just delete the annotations from the works cited and you are good.
  • I think the overall flow of your introduction could be worked on when reading its short sounding.
  • When introducing your codes just a recommendation is to explain what you intended each one to reveal and how it would help your analysis. Like gender, @, and if it contained media.
  • Your essay was really well organized and your paragraphs were always on topic.
  • I think you should touch on your Figure 1 a little more (maybe explain how some of the action words overlapped) and have the analysis of the graph be a little more organized in your data analysis.
  • You are missing one the tagsexplorer maps that I think would add more depth to your @ analysis so there can be a visual on how the @s were connecting and who people were @ing.

1. I thought you analyzed the topic of the wall very well and made a very strong connection between twitter and the social issue. 

2. The topic of social interest is very focused and provides great insight as to what the users were tweeting. In order to strengthen the connection between twitter conversations and the topic I suggest putting in the chart that shows where most tweets were coming from and who they were directed at. 

3. As for the visuals I thought they in a great location that was easy to understand. I just suggest the other chart again that I mentioned in number 2.

4. I thought the format of your essay flowed very well and it was easy to read and understand. Don't forget though in the bibliography to take out the analysis and just leave the citation. 

5. Overall I thought you wrote a great research paper and the only thing you need is to fix the bibliography and maybe add in a little more data to the research. Great job!!

  • connect the figures to twitter with more depth
  • be more specific with the connection between Trump and twitter
  • I will clean up my intro to reorganize the way I introduce my topics.  I will switch my social media to the last half of the paragraph after I give background info on the border wall.
  • With my sources, I think I am going to remove at least one of them from my intro.  Having both in there seems to be a little too much.
  • With my figures, I am going to add the picture of the map I have to help relate the topic even more to twitter trends.  
  • remove analysis from the bib
  • double check the heading is correct
  • think of a clever title