I believe that the articles used in this paper were scholarly, however, I am not positive because I was unable to click on the link that would be in each source’s bibliography. The quotes that were used worked very nicely in your paper.
It is very helpful when you referenced specific important lines within the paper from the poem. That method helped to explain the poem and what was meant by what the author had to say. It allowed for much less confusion.
There is nothing major that needs to be fixed for the paper. I would say to just check for grammar mistakes, and any other minor issues that can be quickly fixed.
Regarding your mechanical errors, the bibliography needs to be fixed and put into MLA format, because it is a little off. Also, don’t forget to put in your page numbers. Lastly, I don’t think that you need the title page because it is MLA format, and only APA uses the title page.
For the most part, all of your quotes are nicely integrated into your paper. The only quote that I would at least look at would be the quote on page four, beginning with Forgiveness of Adult Children…” I think that you should explain more before the quote, before you just put it into the paragraph. It comes in a little too soon without much reference before it.
The use of quotes was pretty good as well as the articles, reputable source and a good source for the paper. The paper as a whole was very good. It's a rough draft obviously so there is a couple grammar fixes but there weren't many issues with grammar at all. MLA format instead of APA... I like the use of the quotes and pieces of the poem as it helped the flow of the paper. Structure is solid overall, good paper, not much to change just make sure you change the APA format to MLA.
Does the essay use quotations from scholarly articles to discuss what people have said about the poem? What can you say about the scholarship?
Yes. I enjoyed hearing Breshears's perspective. You maybe could have added a couple more viewpoints.
Does the essay zoom offer a reading of the poem? And does it zoom in on details to make points about the poem? What can you say about the interpretation of the poem?
I liked your detailed analysis of the poem.
And what would be the one larger concern that you have about the essay? What one suggestion would you make to respond to the concern?
I think you should talk more about your interpretation of the overarching themes.
Also,check the following mechanical aspects of the essay. (If you need to track down information on any proper formats or details, follow MLA style.)
Are quotations from articles properly integrated into the essay?
Are quotations from the poem properly integrated into the essay?
Comments
I believe that the articles…
I believe that the articles used in this paper were scholarly, however, I am not positive because I was unable to click on the link that would be in each source’s bibliography. The quotes that were used worked very nicely in your paper.
It is very helpful when you referenced specific important lines within the paper from the poem. That method helped to explain the poem and what was meant by what the author had to say. It allowed for much less confusion.
There is nothing major that needs to be fixed for the paper. I would say to just check for grammar mistakes, and any other minor issues that can be quickly fixed.
Regarding your mechanical errors, the bibliography needs to be fixed and put into MLA format, because it is a little off. Also, don’t forget to put in your page numbers. Lastly, I don’t think that you need the title page because it is MLA format, and only APA uses the title page.
For the most part, all of your quotes are nicely integrated into your paper. The only quote that I would at least look at would be the quote on page four, beginning with Forgiveness of Adult Children…” I think that you should explain more before the quote, before you just put it into the paragraph. It comes in a little too soon without much reference before it.
Peer Review
The use of quotes was pretty good as well as the articles, reputable source and a good source for the paper. The paper as a whole was very good. It's a rough draft obviously so there is a couple grammar fixes but there weren't many issues with grammar at all. MLA format instead of APA... I like the use of the quotes and pieces of the poem as it helped the flow of the paper. Structure is solid overall, good paper, not much to change just make sure you change the APA format to MLA.
Does the essay use…
Yes. I enjoyed hearing Breshears's perspective. You maybe could have added a couple more viewpoints.
I liked your detailed analysis of the poem.
I think you should talk more about your interpretation of the overarching themes.