Poem Rough Draft

Posted on: Sat, 07/20/2019 - 01:57 By: kwurl21
Poem Draft.pdf

Comments

  • The essay does use quotations from articles. The scholarships used are valid sources
  • The essay is definitely being zoomed in on the poem. The poem is about writers in the past. 
  •  A concern I have for the essay is that for one of the quotations it was not cited after. Cite more quotes
  • MLA style was followed in essay for most part. Period outside cited source instead of inside quotations 

  • The sources that you used were very helpful in developing your argument and they are valid sources. I like the way you incorporated them in too.
  • You had a very strong interpretation of the poem, and the essay zoom offers a deeper understanding. It's good that you put in different quotes from the actual poem.
  • The largest concern I have about the essay is that the quotes are not cited properly. Make sure that you use the in-text citation after the quote and put the authors name into parenthesis. 
  • The MLA format is good and correct, but scoot the works cited up to the top of the page so that it looks a little more clean. Other than that this was a great essay!

  • Good quotations from the poem and outside sources, good implementation as well.
  • Your essay also has an in depth zoom reading of the poem with your own interpretation. No problems there
  • Fix the in text MLA citation format.
  • Again, in text citations were not in MLA format, but other than that its fine.