Does the essay use quotations from scholarly articles to discuss what people have said about the poem? What can you say about the scholarship?

• After reading this essay I believe that it does a very good job using quotations to explain the poem. The essay does a good job with suing the quotes for explanation and information. The citations seemed to fit well with the poem. Does a good job find appropriate sources for research.

Does the essay zoom offer a reading of the poem? And does it zoom in on details to make points about the poem? What can you say about the interpretation of the poem?

• Although you use some citations to explain lines within the poem, there isn’t much of the actual poem within the essay, so it makes it hard to follow. For the beginning of the poem it doesn’t seem to be much explanation, but I believe for the second part of the poem you do a good job of using sources to explain the interpretations.

And what would be the one larger concern that you have about the essay? What one suggestion would you make to respond to the concern?

• The largest concern I would say for this poem is to make sure that the reader can understand the poem without having to look it up to read the poem. Otherwise the essay does a very good job using quotations and sources to explain the poem and its interpretations.

Also, check the following mechanical aspects of the essay. (If you need to track down information on any proper formats or details, follow MLA style.)

Are quotations from articles properly integrated into the essay?

• Yes the quotations are properly places throughout the essay.

Are quotations from the poem properly integrated into the essay?

• Could use more quotation from the poem, but yes they are correctly places into the essay.

• Does the essay use quotations from scholarly articles to discuss what people have said about the poem? What can you say about the scholarship?

You did a good job using scholar takes and making sure to cite where you got the ideas from. You did a good job of using the quotes to fit in with the poem.

• Does the essay zoom offer a reading of the poem? And does it zoom in on details to make points about the poem? What can you say about the interpretation of the poem?

It felt like there were only bits and pieces of your poem in this paper. You also didn’t go in depth on the beginning part of the poem but you did better on the rest of it.

• And what would be the one larger concern that you have about the essay? What one suggestion would you make to respond to the concern?

One thing I'd say is add the whole poem to the paper to help the reader understand the subject of the paper.

• Also,check the following mechanical aspects of the essay. (If you need to track down information on any proper formats or details, follow MLA style.)

• • Are quotations from articles properly integrated into the essay?

Yes

• • Are quotations from the poem properly integrated into the essay?

Yes