The opening background sounds work well. The narrative voice is also nice and conversational. There are a couple of spots where the voice pops a bit from being too loud. The transition into the first audio sample is working well. You may want to give a hint about the speaker or context in the narration that comes after. The text of the narration is working well. You might think about whether adding some musical background to ease in and out of the piece or to create a transition in the middle might be good. I feel like everything is working well, but the conclusion seems a bit abrupt. Is there a way to rewrite the ending to circle back on the insider angle. Nice work.
The opening background…
The opening background sounds work well. The narrative voice is also nice and conversational. There are a couple of spots where the voice pops a bit from being too loud. The transition into the first audio sample is working well. You may want to give a hint about the speaker or context in the narration that comes after. The text of the narration is working well. You might think about whether adding some musical background to ease in and out of the piece or to create a transition in the middle might be good. I feel like everything is working well, but the conclusion seems a bit abrupt. Is there a way to rewrite the ending to circle back on the insider angle. Nice work.