Hiatus

For my revision I spent a majority of my time on the selection of the video clips and the edits I did to make the clips really impact the poem. A major flaw of my poem draft was the timing of the clips and the words. To fix this but keep the original tempo that I intended was to make the clips longs and for the words to stay on screen longer to allow for them to be read. I wanted to make a poem that was fast pace but also very impactful.