Today we will give a quick listen to another of our projects, and then one more audio essay.
Next, we will do an exercise in further script trimming. Follow these steps:
Open the latest version of your audio essay script. You most likely have the script on your laptop, but if you need to, you can retrieve the version you posted or the version with my copy edits.
Keeping the thoughts you posted about potential revisions in mind and working with an aim to tighten the prose, refine the pacing, and bring out the structure, transitions, and movement through the essay, revise the script one more time.
If helpful, incorporate markers for pauses or larger scale revision ideas. When finished, save the script with your last name and an indication that it is a revision.
Finally, open the posting with your initial script and select Edit. Use the new button at the bottom of the posting to upload your revised script. When finished, you can turn to your essay revisions.
For homework, read this article and continue working to complete the final version of your essay which is due on Monday.