I really loved this podcast! You have the right amount of narration and sound effects, and I can tell you are passionate about this subject. You transition smoothly from each idea and sound. I love the music and the scratch of writing at the beginning of the essay. The ribbiting of the frog is a really great touch, bringing the origami even more to life. You are so creative!
The mix of materials and narration is working well. I also like the tone of the narration. In parts I feel like the pacing of the voice goes a bit quickly. And you can make sure the volume levels are adjusted so the voice doesn't compete with the other audio. During the narration, there are some sound issues with the capturing of the voice. It might be that it can be cleaned up. Or we may want to work to ensure that the capturing for the next version is clean and strong. You can fine tune the way the audio complements are woven in, but the use of the materials is working strong. The music is a nice touch toward the end. Again, the volume might be adjusted. All of the materials and the story are working so well, so focus on the technical aspect and polishing will take it to the next level. Very nice.
Your podcast is intriguing, and it is apparent that the topic is something you feel very strongly about. I love how your insight unravels as the essay goes on; I love how you move from a personal experience to a much larger worldview. The background music works well with this gradual unraveling and sets an inspiring tone. I think just minor tweaks on the audio and transitions between sounds/narration can enhance the quality of your essay as a whole.
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I really loved this podcast!…
I really loved this podcast! You have the right amount of narration and sound effects, and I can tell you are passionate about this subject. You transition smoothly from each idea and sound. I love the music and the scratch of writing at the beginning of the essay. The ribbiting of the frog is a really great touch, bringing the origami even more to life. You are so creative!
The mix of materials and…
The mix of materials and narration is working well. I also like the tone of the narration. In parts I feel like the pacing of the voice goes a bit quickly. And you can make sure the volume levels are adjusted so the voice doesn't compete with the other audio. During the narration, there are some sound issues with the capturing of the voice. It might be that it can be cleaned up. Or we may want to work to ensure that the capturing for the next version is clean and strong. You can fine tune the way the audio complements are woven in, but the use of the materials is working strong. The music is a nice touch toward the end. Again, the volume might be adjusted. All of the materials and the story are working so well, so focus on the technical aspect and polishing will take it to the next level. Very nice.
Your podcast is intriguing,…
Your podcast is intriguing, and it is apparent that the topic is something you feel very strongly about. I love how your insight unravels as the essay goes on; I love how you move from a personal experience to a much larger worldview. The background music works well with this gradual unraveling and sets an inspiring tone. I think just minor tweaks on the audio and transitions between sounds/narration can enhance the quality of your essay as a whole.