Audio Essay Draft

This was a helpful and interesting audio essay. It provided goof information around a topic that I am not familiar with but was always interested in. I think this would be especially helpful in social media and the PR realms. I think you may have mistakenly left the program recording though.

The narration has a nice tone. The working in of the first audio sample can be redone so that the narration and the clip don't repeat the same phrase. You may be able to use some background music or other elements for transitions. You can probably also add some ambient noises or other background sounds to add texture, especially for the longer narrative segments toward the end. You may also be able to trim down some of the narration in another revision of the script. It looks like there is a straggling clip somewhere that is stretching out the length of the file.