Use all of the feedback you have received on your playlist to make revisions.
When revising, respond to this challenge:
make the language and voice as compelling as possible. In fact, make an effort to shift to more of a storytelling mode. Use a lower level of formality and a journalistic approach to deliver the same information--expanded with revisions--but do so in a way that addresses the reader more directly and that treats the character more as an element in your narrative.
The revised playlist is due on Monday, March 4th.