I shared most of my feedback in class, so let me know if you have questions about any of the suggestions. The story is strong, so thinking through some of the transitions will provide some big picture adjustments to bring things into focus and keep the flow going. Then polishing will take it to the next level. Nice work.
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I shared most of my feedback…
I shared most of my feedback in class, so let me know if you have questions about any of the suggestions. The story is strong, so thinking through some of the transitions will provide some big picture adjustments to bring things into focus and keep the flow going. Then polishing will take it to the next level. Nice work.