I like the opening and the points in the narration. The tone is also working well. You can resize some of the clips for better viewing. At around 1:10, you may want to pause and add a transition. The points made about the projects are strong. The casual tone of the narration is also quite solid in the later segments. The opening has a less polished feel to the narration. Adding transitions, resizing clips, and perhaps slowing down and reworking some of the narration should take this to the next level. Nice work.
I like the opening and the…
I like the opening and the points in the narration. The tone is also working well. You can resize some of the clips for better viewing. At around 1:10, you may want to pause and add a transition. The points made about the projects are strong. The casual tone of the narration is also quite solid in the later segments. The opening has a less polished feel to the narration. Adding transitions, resizing clips, and perhaps slowing down and reworking some of the narration should take this to the next level. Nice work.