I like the musical track. I also like the social justice angle. Resizing the clips on the screen will help with the visuals. The points are linked well to the materials. At around 1:20, I feel like cutting and zooming in on the image with children will add variety and emphasis. You might add transitions between the segments. At 2:13 you might also cut and zoom in. The audio for the clip might be cleaned up. You might also fade out the clip a bit sooner, and have the narration come back in, maybe on top of it with it very quiet. I like the insight in the memes segment. Again, resizing the clips will be good to see them better. The game segment has good insights. You can think through whether you want to record the narration. It has a nice tone. In spots, I hear a bit of background noise between the bits of talking. You may be able to clean things up in audacity or even RUSH to get a bit more polish on it. In any case, the points and materials are strong, so some of these polish items will make it even stronger. Nice work.
I like the musical track. I…
I like the musical track. I also like the social justice angle. Resizing the clips on the screen will help with the visuals. The points are linked well to the materials. At around 1:20, I feel like cutting and zooming in on the image with children will add variety and emphasis. You might add transitions between the segments. At 2:13 you might also cut and zoom in. The audio for the clip might be cleaned up. You might also fade out the clip a bit sooner, and have the narration come back in, maybe on top of it with it very quiet. I like the insight in the memes segment. Again, resizing the clips will be good to see them better. The game segment has good insights. You can think through whether you want to record the narration. It has a nice tone. In spots, I hear a bit of background noise between the bits of talking. You may be able to clean things up in audacity or even RUSH to get a bit more polish on it. In any case, the points and materials are strong, so some of these polish items will make it even stronger. Nice work.