The discussion and materials on screen are working well. I like the level of detail on the twitter project. In spots, the narration has a bit of a read-aloud feel--and sometimes feels a bit fast paced. It's good that the script is so solid, but it might be worth trying a couple more takes to see what levels of informality you might add to the tone. If the length stretches out, it's fine. You can use the speed function in RUSH to slow clips down if needed. I might cut the opening title to about five seconds to keep things moving. The points are all insightful, the screen materials clear and relevant, and the script well written, so working on the tone, pacing, and smoothing of the audio track to get a nice solid version will take it to the next level. Nice work.
The discussion and materials…
The discussion and materials on screen are working well. I like the level of detail on the twitter project. In spots, the narration has a bit of a read-aloud feel--and sometimes feels a bit fast paced. It's good that the script is so solid, but it might be worth trying a couple more takes to see what levels of informality you might add to the tone. If the length stretches out, it's fine. You can use the speed function in RUSH to slow clips down if needed. I might cut the opening title to about five seconds to keep things moving. The points are all insightful, the screen materials clear and relevant, and the script well written, so working on the tone, pacing, and smoothing of the audio track to get a nice solid version will take it to the next level. Nice work.