I like the materials on screen and the polish in the transitions and visual. I also like the points that are being made. In some spots, I feel like a slightly less formal tone in the narration might be worth thinking about. There are also a couple of spots where there is a short pause in the narration. You can think about whether just cutting a second from the clip or recording one more take makes sense. I think the tone gets less formal as the piece moves along. Again, the points and materials are all working well, so thinking about the audio track and other ways of adding even more polish will make it even stronger. Nice work.
I like the materials on…
I like the materials on screen and the polish in the transitions and visual. I also like the points that are being made. In some spots, I feel like a slightly less formal tone in the narration might be worth thinking about. There are also a couple of spots where there is a short pause in the narration. You can think about whether just cutting a second from the clip or recording one more take makes sense. I think the tone gets less formal as the piece moves along. Again, the points and materials are all working well, so thinking about the audio track and other ways of adding even more polish will make it even stronger. Nice work.