Posted on Sat, 10/26/2019 - 01:35
by trentlupton
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App- Final
https://xd.adobe.com/view/7ecf3f07-62e5-4825-79a5-a5f056d7e85f-08fe/
I made several adjustments. Firstly, I and made the next button larger and more visible. I kept the information slides because I felt they added a lot of good details but I inserted quiz questions after my dense information slides to keep the user engaged and also to show that the answer one might expect isn't true. I think this strengthens my argument because the user will see that what they thought to be true is wrong and then read about the hypocrisy of allowing lobbying.
The app-like look create a…
The app-like look create a nice realistic feel. You might check the formatting in terms of scrolling on the screens that makes the next button hard to spot. I wonder if building in more game-like interaction could bring out the points more forcefully. For instance on screen 3 could there be a choice--how much can lobbyist donate? Perhaps there is a way to "play" through the information, once as a private citizen or corporation and once as a lobbyist. The points that develop are all good and there is a lot of good information. It is also a bit information heavy, so finding ways to foreground the outrageousness maybe through a game or some other strategies will bring the points out even more forcefully. Or you could use design elements and provide more facts and figures to try to bring outrage into focus more clearly. Nice work.