I like the sentiment that comes through at the end. I think the effect would be stronger if it were built around a game element or otherwise had more interactivity and reader involvement. Perhaps some quizzing on moral conundrums that takes people through fine grained decisions like trolly problems, etc. and then ends with a blunt hammerer-home point at the end--save or don't save the planet. Or some other variation that pulls people in and prepares them more for the payoff at the end.
I like the sentiment that…
I like the sentiment that comes through at the end. I think the effect would be stronger if it were built around a game element or otherwise had more interactivity and reader involvement. Perhaps some quizzing on moral conundrums that takes people through fine grained decisions like trolly problems, etc. and then ends with a blunt hammerer-home point at the end--save or don't save the planet. Or some other variation that pulls people in and prepares them more for the payoff at the end.