Posted on Mon, 09/23/2019 - 18:04
by reaway17
There are some light "pops" from my pronunciation at times. Also, the recordings for the TED Talks are a tiny bit rough, mainly because of the background noise. Using Garageband was a learning curve for me and I am still working through some of the kinks to eliminate white noise in the background.
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I like the tone of the…
I like the tone of the narration. I feel like easing in a bit more slowly to the start of the narration might be good. The transition into the ad is working well. For some of the middle segments, you might lower the volume of the background music just a tad. The sound effects are working well. The information is also put together in a logical way that flows nicely. I also like the way the piece builds toward a solution. You might fade out a bit more slowly as well. I'm not sure about the audio cleaning of Garageband, but we can come up with some workaround for any noise issues. The ideas all flow together, and the narration is clean with a nice tone, so some fine tuning will make it even stronger. Nice work.