Some of my recorded script is a bit choppy and parts should be re-recorded. I also want to spend more time looking into more sound effects that could improve the quality of the essay.
I like the way the piece deploys music and sound effects. You can fine tune these but they do well at adding sonic interest. The tone of the narration also seems to be working well. The transition into the first clip works well, but I feel like some discussion of it before moving on the next topic would be good. I noticed some differences in some of the audio background noise for the various narration clips. In a re-recording of the narration, you can aim to get things as consistent as possible. The algorithm clip may be a bit long. Cutting it down to a core piece, and then discussing some aspects of it before moving on to the conclusion will be good. Nice work.
I like the way the piece…
I like the way the piece deploys music and sound effects. You can fine tune these but they do well at adding sonic interest. The tone of the narration also seems to be working well. The transition into the first clip works well, but I feel like some discussion of it before moving on the next topic would be good. I noticed some differences in some of the audio background noise for the various narration clips. In a re-recording of the narration, you can aim to get things as consistent as possible. The algorithm clip may be a bit long. Cutting it down to a core piece, and then discussing some aspects of it before moving on to the conclusion will be good. Nice work.