I plan on adding the clips in. I have them transcribed into my script but have been having issues trying to convert them. I will solve that by tomorrow and have it up and running.
The tone of the narration is working well. The opening with whispering also creates a nice hook. There will be a need to work on the background ambient sound behind the narration using Noise Reduction. You may want to think about when/whether any music or other sonic effects might be woven in. Once the clips are added, the overall sound levels and flow will be easier to judge. For now the narration is clear with a good level of formality. Eager to hear the final version.
The tone of the narration is…
The tone of the narration is working well. The opening with whispering also creates a nice hook. There will be a need to work on the background ambient sound behind the narration using Noise Reduction. You may want to think about when/whether any music or other sonic effects might be woven in. Once the clips are added, the overall sound levels and flow will be easier to judge. For now the narration is clear with a good level of formality. Eager to hear the final version.