Today we will look at some playlists to discuss characteristics of strong descriptions:
http://altscholarship.com/makelit/node/33
http://altscholarship.com/makelit/node/29
Next we will conduct a brief reflection. Use this link. I will give you prompts.
For homework, please complete these two tasks before class on Wednesday:
1. Reading. Go to the reading for Wednesday, read the item(s), and then share your thoughts.
2. Peer review. Go to the list of playlists, and then use the list below to identify items to peer review. Open the item, and then play the songs while reading through the entries. Add a comment responding to these prompts:
- How well does the project situate the character and story for you? If you had not read the book, would it still make sense?
- What can you say about the song selections? Are there any items that fit better than others with your sense of the character?
- How well does the playlist capture the sonic elements of the selections? What kinds of descriptions might extend the sonic analysis?
- What can you say about the character traits discussed in the entries? Are there strategies for moving any descriptions from summary of events and toward insights into the psyche of the character?
- What is working well or has room for strengthening in the prose for the descriptions? How should the writer approach revising the prose?
- What suggestions do you have about the look and feel of the list?
You can either respond prompt-by-prompt or write a blanket paragraph sharing your thoughts on these aspects.
Peer Review Assignments:
Name | Please Review | Please Review | Please Review |
Anton,Alex | Belghith,Ahmed A | Benton,Olivia Caroline | Bortey,Beryl Naa-Borley |
Belghith,Ahmed A | Benton,Olivia Caroline | Bortey,Beryl Naa-Borley | Chan,Brianna Ga-Zung |
Benton,Olivia Caroline | Bortey,Beryl Naa-Borley | Chan,Brianna Ga-Zung | Curtis,Regan |
Bortey,Beryl Naa-Borley | Chan,Brianna Ga-Zung | Curtis,Regan | Davis,Braidyn Alexa |
Chan,Brianna Ga-Zung | Curtis,Regan | Davis,Braidyn Alexa | He,Shara Shu Xin |
Curtis,Regan | Davis,Braidyn Alexa | He,Shara Shu Xin | Hong,Layna |
Davis,Braidyn Alexa | He,Shara Shu Xin | Hong,Layna | Im,Jonah |
He,Shara Shu Xin | Hong,Layna | Im,Jonah | Jyoti,Aunindya |
Hong,Layna | Im,Jonah | Jyoti,Aunindya | Kottakkudy,Sneha Prakasan |
Im,Jonah | Jyoti,Aunindya | Kottakkudy,Sneha Prakasan | Lackey,Lauren Nicole |
Jyoti,Aunindya | Kottakkudy,Sneha Prakasan | Lackey,Lauren Nicole | Lewis,Hailey Catherine |
Kottakkudy,Sneha Prakasan | Lackey,Lauren Nicole | Lewis,Hailey Catherine | Morris,Terrique Jewett |
Lackey,Lauren Nicole | Lewis,Hailey Catherine | Morris,Terrique Jewett | Norris,Shachia Devon |
Lewis,Hailey Catherine | Morris,Terrique Jewett | Norris,Shachia Devon | Norris,Shachia Devon |
Morris,Terrique Jewett | Norris,Shachia Devon | Nukala,Santosh | Osei,Maureen |
Norris,Shachia Devon | Nukala,Santosh | Osei,Maureen | Price,Karis |
Nukala,Santosh | Osei,Maureen | Price,Karis | Rappe,Kelsey Megan |
Osei,Maureen | Price,Karis | Rappe,Kelsey Megan | Silva,Crystal Stephanie |
Price,Karis | Rappe,Kelsey Megan | Silva,Crystal Stephanie | Slusher,Harper Caroline |
Rappe,Kelsey Megan | Silva,Crystal Stephanie | Slusher,Harper Caroline | Smith,Chris James |
Silva,Crystal Stephanie | Slusher,Harper Caroline | Smith,Chris James | Tucker,Autumn Elizabeth |
Slusher,Harper Caroline | Smith,Chris James | Tucker,Autumn Elizabeth | Anton,Alex |
Smith,Chris James | Tucker,Autumn Elizabeth | Anton,Alex | Belghith,Ahmed A |
Tucker,Autumn Elizabeth | Anton,Alex | Belghith,Ahmed A | Benton,Olivia Caroline |