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Today we will look at some playlists to discuss characteristics of strong descriptions:

http://altscholarship.com/makelit/node/33

http://altscholarship.com/makelit/node/29

Next we will conduct a brief reflection. Use this link. I will give you prompts.


For homework, please complete these two tasks before class on Wednesday:

1. Reading. Go to the reading for Wednesday, read the item(s), and then share your thoughts.

2. Peer review. Go to the list of playlists, and then use the list below to identify items to peer review. Open the item, and then play the songs while reading through the entries. Add a comment responding to these prompts:

  • How well does the project situate the character and story for you? If you had not read the book, would it still make sense?
  • What can you say about the song selections? Are there any items that fit better than others with your sense of the character?
  • How well does the playlist capture the sonic elements of the selections? What kinds of descriptions might extend the sonic analysis?
  • What can you say about the character traits discussed in the entries? Are there strategies for moving any descriptions from summary of events and toward insights into the psyche of the character?
  • What is working well or has room for strengthening in the prose for the descriptions? How should the writer approach revising the prose?
  • What suggestions do you have about the look and feel of the list?

You can either respond prompt-by-prompt or write a blanket paragraph sharing your thoughts on these aspects.

Peer Review Assignments:

Name Please Review Please Review Please Review
Anton,Alex Belghith,Ahmed A Benton,Olivia Caroline Bortey,Beryl Naa-Borley
Belghith,Ahmed A Benton,Olivia Caroline Bortey,Beryl Naa-Borley Chan,Brianna Ga-Zung
Benton,Olivia Caroline Bortey,Beryl Naa-Borley Chan,Brianna Ga-Zung Curtis,Regan
Bortey,Beryl Naa-Borley Chan,Brianna Ga-Zung Curtis,Regan Davis,Braidyn Alexa
Chan,Brianna Ga-Zung Curtis,Regan Davis,Braidyn Alexa He,Shara Shu Xin
Curtis,Regan Davis,Braidyn Alexa He,Shara Shu Xin Hong,Layna
Davis,Braidyn Alexa He,Shara Shu Xin Hong,Layna Im,Jonah
He,Shara Shu Xin Hong,Layna Im,Jonah Jyoti,Aunindya
Hong,Layna Im,Jonah Jyoti,Aunindya Kottakkudy,Sneha Prakasan
Im,Jonah Jyoti,Aunindya Kottakkudy,Sneha Prakasan Lackey,Lauren Nicole
Jyoti,Aunindya Kottakkudy,Sneha Prakasan Lackey,Lauren Nicole Lewis,Hailey Catherine
Kottakkudy,Sneha Prakasan Lackey,Lauren Nicole Lewis,Hailey Catherine Morris,Terrique Jewett
Lackey,Lauren Nicole Lewis,Hailey Catherine Morris,Terrique Jewett Norris,Shachia Devon
Lewis,Hailey Catherine Morris,Terrique Jewett Norris,Shachia Devon Norris,Shachia Devon
Morris,Terrique Jewett Norris,Shachia Devon Nukala,Santosh Osei,Maureen
Norris,Shachia Devon Nukala,Santosh Osei,Maureen Price,Karis
Nukala,Santosh Osei,Maureen Price,Karis Rappe,Kelsey Megan
Osei,Maureen Price,Karis Rappe,Kelsey Megan Silva,Crystal Stephanie
Price,Karis Rappe,Kelsey Megan Silva,Crystal Stephanie Slusher,Harper Caroline
Rappe,Kelsey Megan Silva,Crystal Stephanie Slusher,Harper Caroline Smith,Chris James
Silva,Crystal Stephanie Slusher,Harper Caroline Smith,Chris James Tucker,Autumn Elizabeth
Slusher,Harper Caroline Smith,Chris James Tucker,Autumn Elizabeth Anton,Alex
Smith,Chris James Tucker,Autumn Elizabeth Anton,Alex Belghith,Ahmed A
Tucker,Autumn Elizabeth Anton,Alex Belghith,Ahmed A Benton,Olivia Caroline