Can Games Really be Poetry? A Look into Jason Nelson's Work.

Submitted by Shawna Sheperd on Sat, 02/15/2020 - 20:29

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Submitted by iamdan on Fri, 03/20/2020 - 18:56

I like the game-like experience in the opening. After about 30 secs you can turn down the game volumes to give the narration more presence. The tone of the narration is working well. For some of the game discussion, you can think about whether pausing the narration to give the games/poems full audio space makes sense. The visual materials are all quite compelling. I also like the transitions with typing on screen. The aesthetics of the video are working well. The information about Nelson is also delivered well. I like the larger conclusions that are laid out at the end. The materials and narration are all quite compelling, so spending time thinking about the audio experience of the viewer and how best to help the narrative points come through clearly will make it even stronger. Nice work.

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