Pinterest: A "Collection" of Identity Work

Submitted by natalie.p98 on Tue, 04/21/2020 - 00:49

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Submitted by iamdan on Tue, 04/21/2020 - 16:47

I like the tone of the narration. And the music is doing well. For the imagery on screen, I think it might be nice to pause some of the scrolling materials in spots and linger and/or zoom in os some specifics for a moment--a word cloud, a board, etc. The discussion of Mark's identity is working well. You might be able to skip over some of the logistics starting around 2:15. At some point it might be worth thinking about whether Pinterest was getting data from your laptop that overrode some of the profile aspects. The word cloud differences for socks are a good example. Again, matching up the imagery on screen and lingering a bit more on some of the items might be good. The conclusions at the end are working well, so perhaps cutting some of the logistics and a bit of fine tuning with images on screen might be a good place to think about any revisions. Nice work.

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