Axis of Access, Episode 1

Comments

I like the lead in to the piece. The tone of the narration is working well. There is a bit of popping in the opening framing narration, which could be cleaned up or maybe recaptured with less direct air into the microphone if the project gets revised. Some of the volume levels for the different sets of capture materials can be evened out. You may be able to get the recorded clips to be a bit cleaner with some effects and noise reduction. The conversation is engaging, so more work with the audio aspects will make it easier to process the piece as a whole.