Video Report - William Blake

Submitted by natalyv on Thu, 02/20/2020 - 00:21

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Submitted by iamdan on Fri, 03/20/2020 - 14:49

The tone of the narration does a nice job of engaging the viewer. I wasn't sure if it was my machine or if there is no sound during the printmaking segments. If there is no sound for those segments, you can narrate on top of the visuals, and perhaps cut them down. The narration over the Blake Archive segments provides good information that works well with the visuals. You can think about how to rework the opening to be streamlined and then get to the WBA materials more quickly. You can also think about how to expand the focus to draw some larger conclusions--e.g., the role of humans in digital projects, the transformational possibilities of digitization, etc. Some of these points might be set up during the quiet segments at the beginning. The second half is working well, so rethinking how the opening will set things up, and then foregrounding some of the conceptual concerns more clearly will be good ways to focus on revision. For the final version, you can work on clean up of audio, etc. as well. Nice work.

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