The tone of the narration is great. And the points are all good. The clip sizing will help with the content on screen. At around 1:19, you could work in a short pause in the narration to play the sounds of the girl talking, then turn down their volume to continue. At around 3:39, I wonder if shooting a scene or editing to make the art board with the colors active so they are not opaque would be good. Again, the take away points and discussion are all working well. Nice work.
The tone of the narration is…
The tone of the narration is great. And the points are all good. The clip sizing will help with the content on screen. At around 1:19, you could work in a short pause in the narration to play the sounds of the girl talking, then turn down their volume to continue. At around 3:39, I wonder if shooting a scene or editing to make the art board with the colors active so they are not opaque would be good. Again, the take away points and discussion are all working well. Nice work.